Fantasy Novel

This excerpt comes from a fantasy novel that I offered feedback on. I performed a detailed content edit (or line edit) on this section focused on improving clarity, readability, and word choice while maintaining the author’s voice. I prompted ideas for the writer through questions and my own suggestions for removing redundancy and improving descriptions. You’ll notice that this type of editing is less focused on small grammar or punctuation errors as some sections may be rewritten after edits.

A picture of Port Arthur.

Magazine Article

This article is an example of my content editing work. I edited it during my time as the assistant managing editor of a travel magazine. For this article, I left comments on the questions I had as a reader along with suggestions for improving clarity to help the author better reach her audience.

Oral History Transcription

For this particular project, the interviewee preferred clarity over a word-for-word transcription. After transcribing the interview, I preformed this copyedit on the transcription. In my edits, I focused on maintaining the interviewee’s voice while making the transcription easier to read.

Old pictures beside roses and letters.

Family History Book

This excerpt is an example of copyediting from a family history book that I edited for publication. With this text, I avoided making large changes and instead focused on correcting errors in punctuation and grammar. I also occasionally made changes to improve clarity. All of my edits were in line with my client’s specific goals for the text and a style guide.  

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